Saturday, July 14, 2007

INHERENT PRESENCE


Inherently woven into the fabric of my life;

In the dawn of my day,
In the loniliness of my night,
In all the things that I feel,
At every altar that I kneel;

In the colours of my brush,
In the moments of my solitude,
In all the words that I say,
At every emotion that I display;

In the happiness of my life,
In the hardships of my way,
In all the decisions that I take,
At every choice that I make;

In my breath,
In my blood,
In my heart,
In my soul;

Inherently woven into the fabric of my life.

15 comments:

The Lad said...

A beautiful Poem!
The words...The Rhyming all sounds so perfect...
Keep it up and a nice blog!

balaji said...

beautiful

Dream Catcher said...

sheer beauty its is its more like a song..:)

madhuri said...

that was really nice..liked it quite a bit..

vitruvian said...

@Lad: Thanks..ur blog seems cool...hope to c more from u!!
thanks for visiting..

@bala: thanks bala....I really appreciate the fact that u actually check my blog for updates..

@dream catcher: Thanks..yeah..i have quite a few that sem more like songs..I wish someone would put a tune to them...i'm tone deaf!! :(

@mads: Thanks dude...

curryegg said...

I love this part:

In the happiness of my life,
In the hardships of my way,
In all the decisions that I take,
At every choice that I make;

In my breath,
In my blood,
In my heart,
In my soul;

Inherently woven into the fabric of my life.

It has touched my heart... It reminds me that we're the one who choose our own destiny..
Thanks my friend.. :)

Princess Banter said...

You are truly truly truly gifted -- in more ways than one!

Jeya Anand said...

Awesome....and by the way...wat was that pic...??

linking u... :)

Rajeev said...

fantastic! :)

peace & love
\Jeevy

nisha punjabi said...

wow...that was really cute...and very musical..really liked it! :)

vitruvian said...

@curryegg:hey thank u so much!!
ya...its helps to remember that the CHOICE is always ours...

@princess banter:thanks a lot..u r extremely generous in ur praise...

@jeya:the pic is supposed to depict the colours woven into the fabric...
and thanks for blog rolling me!

@rajeev:hey..thanks...that from u is praise indeed...

@nisha:hey thanks...and ya..i'm glad it sounds atleast a lil musical..its meant to be a song...my friend is putting a tune to it...

Neo said...

bful..the rhyming is so...umm..rhymable(made that word up)..lol

vitruvian said...

@neo: lol...yeah i can see that!!
but thanks

An ugly rose.... said...

whoa!..i like your work gal..i must say..good one!!keep goin..

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