here's my favorite one out of those...
this is about 8 years ago...and so its sort of kiddish...
but love it because its my first published work...in my school magazine... :) :D
i was damn proud of myself...
neway..here it is...
HOPE
There is beauty in the sunset,
There is beauty in the dawn,
One makes you think of what has been,
The other leads you on,
So while you enjoy these precious hours,
Let no regrets cloud your mind,
There's still the future bright with hope,
And many a rainbow to find.
There is beauty in the sunset,
There is beauty in the dawn,
One makes you think of what has been,
The other leads you on,
So while you enjoy these precious hours,
Let no regrets cloud your mind,
There's still the future bright with hope,
And many a rainbow to find.
11 comments:
hey there is nothing kiddish...its all in the mind....good little poem
why a rainbow and not a picture of a sun ???/
very inspiring...and well written.....:)
is this is kiddish i dont knw what a mature writing is..really its sweet n innocent..so good n so much hope..wish we cld jst hold on to that hope..time goes by n life..what to say...
@ceedy:
rainbow..well because that represents happiness in my poem...
and it just seems right..
@kp:
hey...thank u..those are a 12 year olds words that ur finding inspiring...so thats some compliment...
thanks on behalf of little sneha..
@Dream:
hey..thanks...
yea...but the more we lose that innocence the more difficult it gets to hold on to that pure and simple hope...
point taken....rainbow it is :)
Aaah haan...thtz nice!
@annie: thank u :):D
sweet lil cute lil poem! :)
@eva:
hey..its been a really long time since i've seen u here..or even on your blog for that matter...
i hope this means we get to see a post from u soon...
thanks for dropping by..
cheers!
its so cute!! makes me think of all the poems i wrote back in school.
this ones really good..trust me!
@nisha:
hey thanks...
u've been away a long...
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