SCARED
Emotions remain as words, unsaid,
Unwritten,Unexpressed,
Scared of what they will unfold;
Emotions remains as stone, untouched,
Unfelt,Unacknowledged,
Scared to know what my heart holds;
Emotions remain as an animal, chained,
Unaware, Untamed,
Scared to accept what my mind knows;
Emotions remain as a sea, silent,
Uncharged, Unrevealing,
Scared of the storm it heralds.
-Sneha
15 comments:
short...simple... quite good.
I can see its amateurish...but yet..better than mine.
Keep writing..there will soon be improvement.:)
@hershey: Thanks...ya i kno the effect is raw...
Cool.
Wonderfully written bout emotions! :)
very good.
I will be back for more.
thanx for the visit upon mah blog and keep comin back for more
peace & love
Jeevy
I've linked ur blog
and btw u have mistaken the blog world.
This is not a bad world. This is the only place where peace & serenity still exists!
heheh!!
peace & love
Jeevy
well, CMB is a blog run by Billy who reviews other's blogs! :)
U just have to submit ur blog link to his askin him to review ur blog and add a link to his blog in ur blogroll! :)
ur blog will be reviewd and will mail u to know that ur blog has been reviewed! :) simple!
peace & love
Jeevy
Can u come on yahoo!?
it wud be easier for me to tell u about it!
Try to come online now. my id in my profile.
I will leave in sometime. come right now if possible!!
peace & love
Jeevy
Hi Sneha, came here through Rajeev's blog...
Lovely blog you have here..
You wrote wonderfully, simple yet powerful..
Take care
lovely pic!!!
very well expressed ...
@Shruti, @ Priyanka: Thanks a lot..
very very symbolic...loved it..!! i wonder how many gr8 ppl i have yet to meet..
yeah blogrolled ya :)keep writing..will b bak ;) for more
im not really into peotry but ur just different, the way u present ur tghts as they are, not heavy embellishments, thats the best part about ur work, keep it going!
Well...poetry is something i m fascinated wid....bt havent tried writing myself...coz i think prose suits me better.
i m fascinated by the way d put emotions in words....Ahhhhhh poetry!!!!
Wonderfully figurative... Bravo...
@Ruma:thanks u just made my day...
@Akanksha:
hey i read ur blog..u seem to write even prose with a certain spontainety...i think thats rreally reqd to write poems..so u've got the tools...u go girl..
looking forward to reading some poems from u...
@Floyd: thanks dude...and i'm practically starving for a poem by u now..so plz keep posting..
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